As mentioned before, the "take it, take it" while shooting might have rushed the shooter. Passing up the low percentage shots shows professionalism and that you aren't out there to just kill something, you care about making a high percentage shot. There was some good footage in there too, keep at it!
In some parts it sounded like yall weren't using a mic, with all the wind noise. What kind of setup are you using?
I think most have covered the important parts. If you fix the shots and safety harnesses the rest was good. Watch your transitions and the volume levels on the background music. Also a mic cover goes a long way. You may want to credit the music you are using at the end or somewhere. Looking forward to seeing more from you guys so I subscribed.
The music in the intro drives me crazy. Anything that sounds like my speakers are blown when they aren't is not a good thing. That aside the safety harness, or lack there of is not a good thing. Do you really want anyone of any age to thinks its alright not to wear a harness? Looks like you guys have spent quite a few dollars on gear. Spend a little more and buy harnesses. Lastly, don't make bad decisions just to get something on film. That last deer was at 15 yards? Looks like she was getting ready to walk past you for a perfect quartering away shot. Be patient! Sorry if I come off a tad harsh. Good go at it overall. Just need to think about it a little more... The language would be the least of my concerns.
We do not have a mic yet as we are all 16 year old boys with only part time jobs.. We buy everything ourselves such as our gear and tags. We are looking into a mic very soon though
Sorry about the music at the beginning.. It didn't do that on my MacBook before I uploaded it. And yes we have spent a lot of money on all of our gear and safety harnesses were purchased this week! And yes he rushed the shot and he knows that it's a shot that shouldn't have been taken but I know we all learned from it.
Overall it shows promise. Some good footage, and good editing. As you get the money, invest in a quality tripod and wireless mics. Some negatives: Some real unprofessional language. Some pet peeves of mine are "Smoked her" "That's what it's all about" "It doesn't get any better than this" Work at coming up with some better things to say when you are excited, it will go a long way. If I counted correctly, you said T Force Outdoors 10 times. One would have been sufficient. I would say you guys have potential, looks like you have good hunting area and you are willing to learn. Should just keep getting better. Good luck to you.
Not going to say more than what has already been said about rushing shot, poor shot placement and poor shot choice and of course language. But watch raised hunting and learn from there show. They are a great show and show amazing ethics and should be a standard for hunting shows coming up. Best of luck to you guys and hope you guys do good. Sent from my VS985 4G using Tapatalk