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A piece I Wrote

Discussion in 'Bowhunting Talk' started by TurkMcgurk, Jan 13, 2011.

  1. TurkMcgurk

    TurkMcgurk Newb

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    When I can't hunt, I write or pull out my big telephoto lens and go take pictures of animals. I wrote this piece about my favorite place to Mule Deer hunt near my home. I've never shared anything I've wrote with any one so I figure maybe some of you would enjoy it. I liked this one.

    I take a Step and stop
    The mountain breeze slowly passes my face
    The Sound of the spring in my ear
    My eyes slowly scrutinize every bush, every tree base
    Another step
    The morning dew is cold on my bare skin
    I welcome it's presence
    The thick pine duff bed draws in the weight of my body as i move
    A long hard look at those rocks
    Another Step
    The first speck of light breaks through the saddle of the mountain
    A Jay sing's out his solemn praise to it's warmth
    A Clarks Nuthatch works his way around an old giant
    It's cone's baring it's seed
    Another step
    A deep breath through the nose
    The smell of grass, pine and hemlock touch my sense's.
    Another step
    I kneel down and pull my binoculars to my eyes
    I slowly scan the edge of the large meadow
    It's home is nestled between ancient sleeping volcanoes.
    The rock underneath there coat of Timber, brush and grass is a time line that tells there story
    I fall back onto the base of a tree and loosen my pack
    It's low browse hiding me from the sun as it climbs into the heavens
    I sit motionless, my bow resting on my thighs
    The time passes slow
    Finally the sun is high, the dew gone, The Birds silent
    I look at my bow and think "Not today my friend... But thank you for bringing me here."
     
  2. stikbow26

    stikbow26 Die Hard Bowhunter

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    Very nice!!!! I feel like I was with you!!!
     
  3. JCraig

    JCraig Die Hard Bowhunter

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    That's great! :tu:
     
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    MeanV2 Weekend Warrior

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    Kewl!! :)

    Dan
     

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